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    Jorgunmandr- The Midgard Serpent

    Class:Guardian
    Difficulty: Average
    Pros:High Defense, High Mobility

    Passive: Aging Serpent
    Jorgunmandr grows as the match goes on upon reaching levels 5,10,15,20 Jorgun gains 2% damage reduction stacking at 12%

    1st ability: Acid Splash/Disrupted Ground - Pukes out Acid in dealing DOT in the targeted area ( the move is like AMC's Honey
    Underground: Jorgun will shake the ground above him for 3 crippling enemies and dealing damage every second
    Cripple duration:1s for
    Ground damage per second 55/60/65/70/75 (45% of your magical power)
    Poison Damage per second: 10/25/30/45/55(35% of your magical power)
    Cooldown:12s

    2nd ability: Burrow - Jurgon digs underground becoming immune to slows and gains increased movement speed,at the cost of reduced sight,Jorgun can then unburrow knocking up enemies for 1s
    Cooldown: 5s

    3rd ability: Deadly Coil/ Fangs of Dammed - Jorgun leaps at a enemy and wrapping himself around them, Jorgun can charge the leap increasing the distance and stun duration between 1-3s. If charged up for longer than 5s it will be cancelled but refunds half the mana cost and cooldown
    Leap Damage: 70/90/110/130/150(35% of your magical power)
    Wrap Damage: 100/130/150/170/200(70% of your magical power)
    In burrow: Jorgun takes a bite of the enemy slowing them
    Slow:2s
    Bite Damage:60/80/100/120/140(80% of your magical power)
    Cooldown 14s

    Ultimate Ability: Serpent Of Ragnarok: Jorgun grows in size becoming cc immune and then devours an enemy, if the enemy is below a low amount of hp, they are executed
    Damage:200/250/300/300/350(40% of your magical power)
    Execute Threshold: 30%
    Cooldown: 90s/87s/75s/67s/67s
    Duration: 4s

    I am open criticism
    Last edited by NEONRemix100; 07-05-2017 at 08:41 PM.

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    Sounds like a combination between Rek`Sai and Cho`Gath

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    Rek'sai was one of the inspirations so yeH

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    Bump so it gets noticed

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    Nice idea, especially since his ult execute works with his Lore. (like Ao and Thana)
    They said they want more execute but it HAS to fit the god.
    My only concern are the numbers on his passive and while underground. Maybe Set his passive to 4/6/8/10.
    Permanent 20 is too much, Kuzenbo caps out at 10 which is already much.
    Also reduce the reflect to 15/15/15/20/20.
    Nemean gives 25% percent.
    His old scaling + nemean + thorns = Reflect ALL Dmg done to you.

    Also how often do his DoTs tick?
    How long stays the Acid after leaving the ability area?
    Do you have a treshold in mind like Thana(scaling with ult lvl) or more like Ao (Set amount on all lvls)

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    Junior Member Senior Minion NEONRemix100's Avatar
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    The threshold is the same as Ao at 30%, the ticks are like anubis's 1 and thnx for the advice on the reduction

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    Its Been a while since i touched this concepts and now i gave it an update

    - Class changed to Guardian
    -Abilities now deal magic damage
    1st ability burrowed version has been changed
    3rd move completely reworked
    Burrow no longer grans immunity to roots

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    A Guardian with an execute? neat!. with this I'll play guardians much more I guess XD

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    The only issue I see with this concept would be how you make him burrow underground when it would be more fitting for him to go underwater since that is where he dwells due to him being a sea serpent :P

    Other than that, I like the concept. Would be fun to play guardian while having an execute.
    Hey look buddy, i'm a support main, that means I feed my team kills.

    Not kills just for our adc, as that would leave the rest of the team underfed

    I help all my teammates.

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    Quote Originally Posted by WolfiexLuna View Post
    The only issue I see with this concept would be how you make him burrow underground when it would be more fitting for him to go underwater since that is where he dwells due to him being a sea serpent :P

    Other than that, I like the concept. Would be fun to play guardian while having an execute.
    How is underwater gonna work when when 99.999% of the map is on land?

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