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    Set- God Of Chaos( First Concept)

    1.this is my first concept so i am open to criticism
    2. i am still new to the forums so if any looks awful i am still learning

    Class: Warrior
    Difficutly: Average
    Pros: High Crowd Control, High Sustain

    Passive: Battle Hungry- For enemy every god that is in combat gains stacks of physical power and HP5,are lost when a god is out of combat
    Physical power: 4% for each god(max.5 stacks)
    HP5: 3 per god


    1st ability: Blood Vengeance
    Swings his Khonpesh infront of him dealing medium damage, if an enemy is to the handle of the blade, the damage is doubled
    Damage: 50/100/150/200/250 (65% of your physical power)

    2nd ability:The Red Sands
    Sets commands the red sands to attack, attacking a wave hitting and knockback enemies hit, if he hits enemy gods he can quickly make the sands thicken rooting them
    Damage:70/110/140/160/200(60% of your physical power)
    Root: 0.75/1/1.25/1.50/2/2.50

    3rd ability: Tyranical Defense
    Set forms a Shield made of Chaos equal to a percantage of his, which upon expiring will explode damaging and silencing enemies around him
    Silence: 2s
    Damage:50/70/90/110/130(45% of your physical power)
    Shield duration: 3s
    Shield percentage: 15-30% of your current hp

    Ultimate Ability: Madness In The Sands-Channels for 2.5 to creates a massive sandstorm blinding enemy gods and slowing them
    Blind:/1/1.5/1.75/2/2.50
    Slow:30/40/50/60/70
    Voicelines
    Intro: i wil make these lands, my own
    Buying Offensive: I will be unkillable, Why do i need this?

    Buying Defensive: i don't think this fits on me, Ehh, if it helps me keep ahead

    Low Health: You can't stop Chaos, Darn it i lost a bone

    Placing Wards: Chaos will spread throught you!!!

    Killing Spree: My power will for an eternity, You cannot stop Madness

    Death: You Will Suffer!!!

    Taunts
    Osiris: You're son may have defeated me, but you will not
    Anubis: Yo Dog, can you just kill my brother plz?
    Loki: a fellow madman, i see?
    Nemesis: You're sibling a douche, know how that feels

    Jokes:
    Prepare to d*coughs* rude sandstorm
    Chaooooooooos(sings), umm, you didnt hear that
    What do you call a ugly sorceress in egypt, a sandwitch


    i am open to criticism
    Last edited by NEONRemix100; 03-20-2017 at 05:54 PM.

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    Red sands
    Is it medium or short ranged?
    Sand wave
    So you say 300 dmg +20% if done right?
    Do they give vision?
    Do you can put them beside a wall or around Set?
    Madness In The Sands
    I like the ultimates that dont deal dmg, they always end up somewhat unique and require teamwork
    Unless its terra, then its "meh"
    Passive
    I would change since it would be the strongest in conquest and fire giant teamfights and im a joust player- meaning it would be way more useless

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    His third move is like rama's ult and they float around him and note I might change this into a escape move
    His 2 has the range of poseidon's wave but it is slightly larger
    His passive might change but I will still keep HP5

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    Quote Originally Posted by NEONRemix100 View Post
    His third move is like rama's ult and they float around him and note I might change this into a escape move
    His 2 has the range of poseidon's wave but it is slightly larger
    His passive might change but I will still keep HP5
    Dont you feel that poseidon wave is op enough, without making it wider and rooting for 2.5 s?
    I would say reduce all of that by 1/4 and were gud to go

    His 3 is pretty neat
    Has potential for great plays if you have decent team
    At first being untargetable seemed a bit op, but then i remembered sol's free sanctuary

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    Third move reworked now a heal and removed passive from 1st ability,added channel to ult

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    You should rename his ultimate
    "Darude" ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

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    Pro tip: add ability type. It helps readers visualize the move.
    Pro tip 2: Add an image. Doesn't have to be your own art, just give credit.
    Pro tip 3: Add color, it catches the eye.

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    Quote Originally Posted by KingDiamondZone View Post
    Pro tip: add ability type. It helps readers visualize the move.
    Pro tip 2: Add an image. Doesn't have to be your own art, just give credit.
    Pro tip 3: Add color, it catches the eye.
    I have no idea on how to do the last 2 so yeah, but thnx for the 1st idea

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    Quote Originally Posted by NEONRemix100 View Post
    I have no idea on how to do the last 2 so yeah, but thnx for the 1st idea
    To add an image, make an imgur account, and use direct link in the image tool on the toolbar when editing a post. To change the color of text, use the tool in the toolbar represented by an A

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    Passive: Pure Madness

    For every god that is in combat gains stacks of physical power and HP5,are lost when a god is out of combat
    Physical power: 4% for each god(max.10 stacks)HP5: 3 per god

    should be changed to :

    Passive: Pure Madness

    For every enemy god that is in combat gain a stack of physical power and HP5 [max : 5]. Stacks are lost when Set is out of combat or when the enemy gods leave the battlefield.

    Per Stack : Physical power: 4% , HP5: 3 per god

    also you should add a range to the passive so that it wouldn't be to OP.
    Check out my god concepts!


    currently still working on the 72 pillars of solomon

    Completed Pillars :
    Baal | Agares | Vassago

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