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    Amatsu Mikaboshi, The August Star, God Concept Challenge

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    Amatsu Mikaboshi, The August Star







    Lore:

    The solitary God of Hell, Amatsu Mikaboshi is He of Darkness and Sin. He is the Shepard of Tarnished souls, governing over the souls of those whose lives were sinister and unrighteous in the Realm of Hell, Soku-no-Kumi.

    He was given the greatest and hardest task of all the Gods, and his reign is one fit only for one. He is the god of Sin and Darkness, and because of this he is a cold, bitter sort of God, feared more than respected.

    His fellow Gods find him a burden, but respect him just as well, since he must rule in seclusion over vile, Sinful souls. He sees Humanity as Izanami did, a Sinful lot of ingrates who aren't deserving of the gift of live they were bestowed with. He's bitter and hateful toward them, but despite this he never acts out on his feelings and anger; rather he's intolerant of Humankind. He is a God of sin and corruption, possessed of a cold, stoic and bitter nature. He and Tsukiyumi, being the opposites they are, do not get along with one another in their respective roles as Guardians of the deceased.

    Because of his Darkness, Amatsu Mikaboshi is not referred to as a Guardian, but instead referred to as the August Star, since he was born from the darkness of the Endless Stars.



    Info:

    Pantheon: Japanese
    Type: Melee, Magical
    Roles: Warrior
    Pros: High single target damge, medium Crowd Control

    Playstyle: I intend for Amatsu to be a close combat warrior. His passive and abilities are designed to lock people down and stick to them. The only long range attack he has is "Through the Cosmos", which is meant to be his engage/escape.


    Passive: Gravity Zone

    A miniature star floats around Amatsu. Enemies within 30 units will get a stack of gravity every 2 seconds. At 3 stacks, the enemy will softly gravitate towards Amatsu, at 6 stacks the gravitational pull will double. (Like Poseidons whirlpool)
    Stacks last for 5 seconds after enemies move out of Amatsus Gravity Zone.



    Ability 1: Cosmic Wind

    Amatsu manouvres behind an enemy god to stab him and heal himself for 50% of the damage.

     



    Damage: 50/70/80/100/120 +40% Magical Damage



    Ability 2: Through the Cosmos

    Amatsu dashes. He vanishes in dark smoke and reappears to strike. If amatsu is targeting no enemy gods, he will just vanish and reappear at the end of his targeter. If an enemy is close to Amatsu, Amatsu won't vanish and instead he will just strike (Like Amaterasus 3).
    This ability can go through walls.

     



    Strike Damage: 80/100/120/150/180 + 60% Magical Power



    Ability 3: Wall of Steel

    Amatsu swings his swords in a fury of metal, dealing damage and reflecting incoming projectiles and melee attacks for 20% of the damage. (Also applies to incoming abilities) (Only applies to attacks coming from the front)


    Damage: 20/25/30/35/40 +20% Magical Damage every .5 seconds for 2 Seconds



    Ultimate: Singularity

    Amatsu collapses his miniature star into a blackhole, making his passive unescapeable, crippling enemies and silencing them.
    The blackhole grows in size and floats in a 30 unit radius around Amatsu (the border of his passive). Enemies that touch the black hole get damaged. After 3 seconds the blackhole collapses again and turns back into a miniature star.


    Black Hole Damage: 100/120/140/180/200 +50% Magical Power Every Second
    Last edited by samirc11; 05-11-2016 at 06:28 AM.

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    Cool concept.

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    Cool concept.
    thank you man, appreciate it

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    1. Warriors are Physical so he could not be magical.
    2. This dude plays like an Assassin

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    1. Warriors are Physical so he could not be magical.
    That's not set in stone, Ao Kuang is magical even though he plays like an assasin. Just because it hasn't been done yet doesn't mean it can't/shouldn't happen. New stuff is needed to keep the game interesting

    2. This dude plays like an Assassin
    Depending on how you build someone, they can fit any role. The most obvious example being cabroken.
    Last edited by samirc11; 05-11-2016 at 08:13 AM.

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    Are you kidding me? Osiris IS a magical warrior. Good concept, BTW

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    Are you kidding me? Osiris IS a magical warrior. Good concept, BTW
    Actually Osiris is a physical warrior lol, but thanks for liking the concept

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    I like the moveset but I dunno what the god of hell has to do with metal and gravity.

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    I like the moveset but I dunno what the god of hell has to do with metal and gravity.
    Well, because there are already so many gods of hell, and because there most likely will come more. I decided to focus more on his origin, which is "the darkness of the endless stars" and his name "the August Star".
    Also, just because he is the God of hell, doesn't mean that his abilities have to be hell related. He was not born as the hell God.
    And metal has nothing to do with it lol, it's just the name of the ability.
    Last edited by samirc11; 05-15-2016 at 06:28 PM.

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